From ff09f368ce09bcd18ba2ae50add6417ff440b149 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Avery Regier Date: Sat, 7 Jul 2018 12:08:19 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] correct spelling --- guide/020.flash | 18 +++++++++--------- 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) diff --git a/guide/020.flash b/guide/020.flash index 6d659d62..f1f1455b 100644 --- a/guide/020.flash +++ b/guide/020.flash @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Transcribed by Jeffrey Newman <jpn5@cornell.edu>

-There's a bright flash of light as Sinclair's flashforward begins. +There's a bright flash of light as Sinclair's flash-forward begins.

There's a brief shot of Sinclair, standing in what appears to be a corridor @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ on Babylon 5. He's wearing battle gear, and looks as if he's already been through a big fight. We hear Garibaldi yelling, "Commander!"

-This then cuts to a flash of fire, which dissapates quickly, revealing +This then cuts to a flash of fire, which dissipates quickly, revealing another person in Earth Force battle gear, in addition to a heavy helmet. He is wielding a flame thrower. He fires again, toward a target that is behind and to the left of the camera. @@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ on screen. One walks in front of the camera.

Cut to a corridor. A fire is burning in the foreground. There are a -number of panicing people running through the corridor. Several others are +number of panicking people running through the corridor. Several others are along the sides of the corridor, firing away from us.

@@ -36,12 +36,12 @@ unidentified man in the same battle gear, firing a similar weapon.

Cut to a view of a wall. The wall is being cut through, as with a blow -torch, from the otherside. It appears to be cutting a rectangular shaped +torch, from the other side. It appears to be cutting a rectangular shaped door. There is nothing else in the shot to show what size a hole it is.

Cut to Sinclair and Garibaldi, standing next to each other. People are -running accross in front of them. Garibaldi says, "They've burned through +running across in front of them. Garibaldi says, "They've burned through levels seven and eight. Can't stop them. They're everywhere." Sinclair, somewhat out of breath, says, "Garibaldi," as if there's something he has to tell him. We hear more firing and sirens in the background. Garibaldi @@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ continues, "Look, I've rigged the fusion reactors. There's not much time." The camera shot widens, showing a longer corridor, with more panicked people. We see the weapon that Garibaldi is wielding is a very large bazooka looking thing, several feet long. "Get going, I'll hold -'em as long as I can." Sinclair mumbles, "No-" Garibaldi quickly reponds, +'em as long as I can." Sinclair mumbles, "No-" Garibaldi quickly responds, "Look, come on, this isn't a conversation. Jeff... it's OK, I finally understand. This is the moment I was born for. Now go. Go." There is a flash "GO!" Sinclair is carried away in a mob of people. He's @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ There still is no enemy in sight. As the continue to fire, they retreat back towards us.

-Cut to Garibaldi, who turns, and begins firing his weapon, apparantly in +Cut to Garibaldi, who turns, and begins firing his weapon, apparently in support of others. As he fires off multiple shots in quick succession, we get a close-up of his face. There is real anger there, as opposed to the expressions of pure survival on the other faces we have seen. He yells, @@ -75,11 +75,11 @@ expressions of pure survival on the other faces we have seen. He yells, some!" (or something to that effect)

-Cut to Sinclair, still carried off by a mob of people, futilly waving to +Cut to Sinclair, still carried off by a mob of people, futilely waving to Garibaldi. He yells, "Wait, Garibaldi!"

-There is another flash, as the flashforward ends. The entire scene takes +There is another flash, as the flash-forward ends. The entire scene takes 47 seconds.