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@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Transcribed by Jeffrey Newman
<a href="mailto:jpn5@cornell.edu">&lt;jpn5@cornell.edu&gt;</a>
<p>
There's a bright flash of light as Sinclair's flashforward begins.
There's a bright flash of light as Sinclair's flash-forward begins.
<p>
There's a brief shot of Sinclair, standing in what appears to be a corridor
@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ on Babylon 5. He's wearing battle gear, and looks as if he's already been
through a big fight. We hear Garibaldi yelling, "Commander!"
<p>
This then cuts to a flash of fire, which dissapates quickly, revealing
This then cuts to a flash of fire, which dissipates quickly, revealing
another person in Earth Force battle gear, in addition to a heavy helmet.
He is wielding a flame thrower. He fires again, toward a target that is
behind and to the left of the camera.
@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ on screen. One walks in front of the camera.
<p>
Cut to a corridor. A fire is burning in the foreground. There are a
number of panicing people running through the corridor. Several others are
number of panicking people running through the corridor. Several others are
along the sides of the corridor, firing away from us.
<p>
@ -36,12 +36,12 @@ unidentified man in the same battle gear, firing a similar weapon.
<p>
Cut to a view of a wall. The wall is being cut through, as with a blow
torch, from the otherside. It appears to be cutting a rectangular shaped
torch, from the other side. It appears to be cutting a rectangular shaped
door. There is nothing else in the shot to show what size a hole it is.
<p>
Cut to Sinclair and Garibaldi, standing next to each other. People are
running accross in front of them. Garibaldi says, "They've burned through
running across in front of them. Garibaldi says, "They've burned through
levels seven and eight. Can't stop them. They're everywhere." Sinclair,
somewhat out of breath, says, "Garibaldi," as if there's something he has
to tell him. We hear more firing and sirens in the background. Garibaldi
@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ continues, "Look, I've rigged the fusion reactors. There's not much time."
The camera shot widens, showing a longer corridor, with
more panicked people. We see the weapon that Garibaldi is wielding is a
very large bazooka looking thing, several feet long. "Get going, I'll hold
'em as long as I can." Sinclair mumbles, "No-" Garibaldi quickly reponds,
'em as long as I can." Sinclair mumbles, "No-" Garibaldi quickly responds,
"Look, come on, this isn't a conversation. Jeff... it's OK, I
finally understand. This is the moment I was born for. Now go. Go."
There is a flash "GO!" Sinclair is carried away in a mob of people. He's
@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ There still is no enemy in sight. As the continue to fire, they retreat
back towards us.
<p>
Cut to Garibaldi, who turns, and begins firing his weapon, apparantly in
Cut to Garibaldi, who turns, and begins firing his weapon, apparently in
support of others. As he fires off multiple shots in quick succession, we
get a close-up of his face. There is real anger there, as opposed to the
expressions of pure survival on the other faces we have seen. He yells,
@ -75,11 +75,11 @@ expressions of pure survival on the other faces we have seen. He yells,
some!" (or something to that effect)
<p>
Cut to Sinclair, still carried off by a mob of people, futilly waving to
Cut to Sinclair, still carried off by a mob of people, futilely waving to
Garibaldi. He yells, "Wait, Garibaldi!"
<p>
There is another flash, as the flashforward ends. The entire scene takes
There is another flash, as the flash-forward ends. The entire scene takes
47 seconds.
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